Friday, November 25, 2011

I love her

She loves another boy you see
But I still love her a whole lot
In my dream it's Leah and I
At school though I'm an after thought

I'm a fool for love you understand
I will do anything for my love
Hold her books, her trumpet for band
She is my angel from above

There is no hope for my desire
She loves her boyfriend way too much
I may as well leave and retire
And stop wishing for her soft touch

But still I love without regret
I won't let go no not quite yet.

2 comments:

  1. Can you please go into "settings" and formatting and change the language to English? This will make it easier for your English classmates to find your comments section. Besides, this is English class after all.
    I enjoyed reading your responses to the short stories. The poem about love was effective because it had a strong sense of voice. Do continue to write reflectively about literature on your blog and keep working on expressing yourself as accurately and eloquently as possible.

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  2. Sorry Ms. Kwon....I just didn't realize..... I just changed! :)

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